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"It 's not fair!" the passenger shouted. He had just paid for the ferry ride and that was the reason why he so upset. He stomped his foot and threw his arms in the air. To his surprise, he accidentally threw his ticket over the side. Unfortunately he had to watched it float away.Great! Just a few helping verbs errors. I would look up where to have "have and has". 来自 Better Writing Right Away【外教写作9月班】 班 呆***银 的心声